I like the amount of footage of my star vehicle coaching in my first draft of Life After Football. However there is not enough footage of him playing and just seems like a collation of random footage. I also did not add professional assistances such as captions or channel logos either.
I feel that my second draft is better than my first for a couple of reasons. The first of which is that there is a lot more footage of my star vehicle in his professional playing days. This will make audiences recognise him more whilst being able to reflect back on his career and how much it has changed. There is also a better sequence of events which helps to make 'Life After Football' flow more
My final documentary looks a lot more professional than my first two attempts. I have featured the production company, the channel logo and I have even added a caption. These little additions all connote professional publications which is what Life After Football now represents. I am very happy with this as it reflects the creative journey I have come on since September.
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